I and my classmates had beef steaks yesterday. We went to there by bicycles. The steak house was very big and beautiful; its food was delicious and fresh. Unfortunately, on the way we went back to school, my running-board flew out suddenly and I was frightened. Nevertheless, it was funny and my friends laughed exaggeratedly. My bicycle had bad quality, but it was expensive and was the cheapest one at the store. I think the quality is really important. Next time, I will choose my bicycle cautiously.
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Hi Lily. I'm a bit confused, and perhaps you are, too. You mention a running-board, which is not part of a bicycle as far as I know; your photo is of a bike pedal.
In English you should always try to put others before yourself: "My classmates and I..."
You don't need "to" with "there." Also, you can choose "by bicycle" or "on bicycles." for your group of classmates.
The title here has too many verbs, and the subject is countable. Try it this way: "My pedal fell off!"
How can the bike be both expensive and the cheapest one?
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