I went to see a doctor yesterday because I got a cold. If I don’t take medicine, I will recover slowly, I don’t know why? Taking medicine will let me feel dizzy because the medicine effect. I felt dizzy of head and dim of eyes now, I need a rest but I can’t because the mid-term is coming soon. I have to get up steam and recover rapidly. God blessing me!
2007年4月21日 星期六
I got a cold
I went to see a doctor yesterday because I got a cold. If I don’t take medicine, I will recover slowly, I don’t know why? Taking medicine will let me feel dizzy because the medicine effect. I felt dizzy of head and dim of eyes now, I need a rest but I can’t because the mid-term is coming soon. I have to get up steam and recover rapidly. God blessing me!
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Hi, this is the last post of this second time period.
"I don't know why" is not a question.
"...will MAKE me feel dizzy." This dizziness is the medicine's effect, so the rest of your sentence is redundant.
You probably had multiple mid-terms.
"God blessing me" is a fragment.
You are writing often enough; thanks.
Next writing period is coming very soon.
Chris
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