Third, it is useful when I watch the alien movies. Studying English well, it will be
a big help to understand English-language movies. Forth, all my friends like study
English. Because of this, I can always practice English with my friends. I can learn
form others. When I talk to them in English, I don't feel shied. I can speak what I
want to say even thought I make some mistakes. It's another way for me to improve
my English skills. Fifth, studying English is good for using the internet. The most
important reason is for me to study English is that I think studying English well is
a good way for me to have a foreign boyfriend in different countries. I have dream
that I can married with a foreigner in the future. If I can learn English well,
it’s a big chance for me to have a alien boyfriend. To sum up those reasons, I think that studying English is good for us.
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It makes me uncomfortable to have you describe all foreign things as "alien" because that usually refers to creatures from other worlds.
You have a bad habit, it seems, of having too many subjects. For instance: "Studying English well, it will be..." You already had a subject, "studying," so why do you also add "it"? Just say:
"Studying English well can be a big help in understanding English. . . "
Shy is an adjective; shied is a rare verb.
Though and thought have been confused here.
"I can married" doesn't make sense.
"I can get married to a foreigner" is OK.
So...your main reason for studying English is to establish an international marriage? Interesting. . .
Chris
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