Today I will go to eat a chafing dish with my colleagues. We have not met for a long time, so I’m very look forward to meeting them. They are very nice to me, I love them very much. I am thankful for their help at work; during the work, they are my spiritual stay. I love we work hard together and help each other; I consider my colleagues are really important to me, and they are my forever friends.
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Hi
First, the photo shows a hot pot, not a chafing dish. Try http://tbn0.google.com/images?q=tbn:1GJpHsq4782bCM:http://www.ckbproducts.com/images/chafing-dish-wholesale-by-maxam-KTCHAF.jpg
for a photo of a chafing dish; its purpose is to keep food warm, not to cook its contents. Also, I hope you didn't really eat the pot.
"I'm really looking forward to seeing them again." (The parts I changed were wrong) "I love we?" Really?
How about: "I love the way we work hard together. . ."
Chris
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